WOW. For such a short visual novel, this was an incredible experience – thank you! The art is stunning, but the real winner for me is the writing; I love how you've utilized perspective and wordplay to recycle previous lines in a different context, giving them a whole new meaning and thus making them more powerful and emotionally impactful for the story. Additionally, the illusion of choice further bolsters the feeling of entrapment and repetition of the interwoven world of dream and reality created by the MC's longing for perfection and appeasement, as well as fear of disappointment and failure. The music helps create a suffocating atmosphere, fitting the MC's stressful and overworked lifestyle. Few grammar mistakes, but not story-breaking. Well done! 9/10
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for such a lovely comment! Writing this was a fun time for me and you seriously hit the nail on the head for what I was trying to go for, so I really appreciate the kind words <3
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Can you add it to Android please?
Sorry, but I'm not planning to expand this game to any more platforms. Thanks for your interest, though!
WOW. For such a short visual novel, this was an incredible experience – thank you! The art is stunning, but the real winner for me is the writing; I love how you've utilized perspective and wordplay to recycle previous lines in a different context, giving them a whole new meaning and thus making them more powerful and emotionally impactful for the story. Additionally, the illusion of choice further bolsters the feeling of entrapment and repetition of the interwoven world of dream and reality created by the MC's longing for perfection and appeasement, as well as fear of disappointment and failure. The music helps create a suffocating atmosphere, fitting the MC's stressful and overworked lifestyle. Few grammar mistakes, but not story-breaking. Well done! 9/10
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for such a lovely comment! Writing this was a fun time for me and you seriously hit the nail on the head for what I was trying to go for, so I really appreciate the kind words <3
10/10 love this game The art is cute 2 ^^
Ithe art is stunning uwaa
the art is simply sublime. Love the denpa like structure of it all!
Ah, thanks!
I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHH!! The art is so pretty >w<
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Our artists were really brought their A-game to this project <33
🤍GREAT GAME🖤
Thank you so much for playing!!
It's very nice! I really enjoyed it
Ah, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it <3